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Friday, July 4, 2008

Captured

Captured! The word sent shivers down her spine. Cindy Grommet looked across the bay. It looked wonderful to her. She saw the ship some out of the horizon and the girl shouted, "Ship!!!!!!!!!!!!!" to her friends. "Fire at will!" shouted the commander. "Yes sir." replied the troops. The shots rang out over the once still bay. Cindy looked at the cannonball that she was holding, she chugged it in the cannon and pulled the swab and lit it on fire. She gently and carefully lit the long end of the string. It sizzled and with a mighty BOOM!SPLASH! It hit the water and part of the enemy ship. She smiled to herself and made another one go off. The Ship was gone....It was over..... They weren't captured after all.

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